3/22/2009

What Peter Did

The television spits out cheap, garbling falsehoods that bark like the stupid mutt at the corner of the rug. The incessant noise, but it’s good, because it covers up less favorable sounds and drowns out Peter’s thoughts.

He fingers the curling edge of the microwave instant meal laying on the end table, illuminated by a dingy table lamp as its pull-cord dangles like an incriminating noose. The curtains are drawn. It’s still loud and that’s good, or else the neighbors would hear what’s going on.

Peter yells at the dog and it whimpers quiet. Peter’s eyes accidentally stray to the other edge of the carpet…

He curses and looks away, dropping the ugly object in his left hand. Cold and dark is how it looks and cold and dark is how it sounds as it clatters on the linoleum.

Peter shakily steps over the form of his late wife and stumbles into the bathroom.

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Commentary: This is one of my later ficlets. I decided to post it if only for N555Champ's comment:

obvliously, his wife is sleeping on the floor, and she is LATE to work.
The “less favorable sounds” are the sounds of Peter’s son’s emo metal garage band attempting to make some sort of devil worship song material.
The “ugly object” is a wire sculpture his daughter made in art class.

Case solved. I win.


3/06/2009

Thank You For Choosing Bales Industries

"Sound easy enough?" Dr. Norris said, ubiquitous smile creasing his magazine-cover face behind thick steel-rimmed glasses.

Jane and Robert nodded, folded hands on Jane's protruding belly.

"All righty, then. I'll leave you two to decide." Dr. Norris stood up, still grinning, and left the room.

The couple exchanged glances a little nervously. Robert sighed and raised his hand, tapping the "Male" button, eyes flicking across the screen as another clean, neutral interface slid up. The top said "Hair."

Robert exhaled. "Well…our given genotypes allow for brown or blond. What do you think?"

Jane paused. "Your brown hair. I want him to look like you."

Robert smiled, blushed a little, and tapped "Brown." Next screen.

"Eyes?"

"Oh…something striking. Maybe hazel with flecks of gold," Jane said, more excited now. "And as for the height, make him a good five-seven by adolescence."

An hour and eighteen screens later (the last cheerfully said, "Thank you for choosing Bales Industries BabyBuilder™"), Dr. Norris bounced back in. His eyes gleamed.

"Looks like you two have a beautiful baby boy made up. I'll download your input and implant it in Jane within the month. You can make an appointment at the front desk." He ushered them out, and then fell into his chair, rubbing his eyes. "Nice couple."

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Commentary: I recently heard about a new technology that let you have "designer babies." As Charles Gibson said, "Would anyone do that?" This explores that concept. Also, we're covering genes and heredity in Science right now.